tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4567168789336947243.post2494171609111144732..comments2024-02-25T09:45:48.931-05:00Comments on Lally's Alley: TERENCE WINCH'S THIS WAY OUT (AND "WHEN NEW YORK WAS IRISH")Lallyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05310472614196384595noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4567168789336947243.post-90816411585316650362014-03-19T11:31:40.808-04:002014-03-19T11:31:40.808-04:00Terence, you are the master of the turn of the las...Terence, you are the master of the turn of the last line!! I dig your poems from their start for the reasons my dad describes, but the last line always blasts the thing you're getting at into the stratosphere. All the complexities at the heart of the poem condensed in one surprising revelatory last line. I never see it coming and love where it goes every time.<br /><br />Milesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4567168789336947243.post-58908537536836603672014-03-18T17:31:35.809-04:002014-03-18T17:31:35.809-04:00Very lovely writing. And shyly (as opposed to &quo...Very lovely writing. And shyly (as opposed to "slyly") clever. Poe lived and died in Baltimore and quoted the raven: "Nevermore." Hence, I believe that Terrence is winking at us when he says; <br />"I will delight you, furthermore,<br />with my hymns to Baltimore."<br /><br />~ WillyAlamedaTomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01623796440779934437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4567168789336947243.post-12651524126568614102014-03-17T23:00:45.259-04:002014-03-17T23:00:45.259-04:00Vice versa, only double,
love MVice versa, only double,<br />love MLallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05310472614196384595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4567168789336947243.post-18889286586069648412014-03-17T22:47:25.482-04:002014-03-17T22:47:25.482-04:00Dear M:
Just back from the last of my weekend St P...Dear M:<br />Just back from the last of my weekend St Paddy's gigs. Clicked on your blog & this wonderful piece popped up on the screen. Thanks so much, my friend. Don't know where I'd be without you. love,<br />Ttpwhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05909239000589253931noreply@blogger.com